I’ve got first point and I’ve got a second point so what I’ve got is a paragraph but it undeveloped it’s got two main point look firstly and secondly and that’s pretty good but it’s not developed so what can we do well we can start adding support an explanation in details let’s take a look here’s the same paragraph but more developed topic sentence installing solar panels will improve your finances okay so to save you money the green is the first idea but now it’s developed a little bit that’s what let’s look at it.
Firstly it will help you save money and protect us for example many people report saving up to eighty percent their normal electricity bill so we’ve got a topic sentence we’ve got . with development then we’ve got point with development secondly many areas have the solar panels setups with family so the family can sell the electric back to the electric company and so there’s my second point and then here is the development at that point this means that the electric company but by the energy from you and transfer to their station so I’ve got two points firstly and secondly I got development for those point and I’ve got a topic sentence and what’s important to understand is that this green part and this red part part and part are important and so is the development for each part.
The topic sentence says installing solar panels will improve your finances here’s the first reason how here’s the second reason this is important in terms up to set up a pure now let’s look at another paragraph that is more developed k topic sentence installing solar panels will improve your finances okay we know this it will help you save money on their electric bills for example many people report saving up to eighty percent of the normal electricity bill as a result families can put that money in the banks which might help the family pay for college so again here we’ve got development for point and then development and what we’ve got here is a healthy paragraph words it’s healthy because it has a topic sentence it hasdevelopment point is here in the green point and development is here in the red and that’s important.
Now I’m gonna show you in other paragraph that I took from the internet to support the same thing here’s a simple example it says my home town is famous for several natural or several amazing natural features so this writer has first right first and this writer has second can now instead of second he used also and then he actually has a third point so he said first also and third to the ideas he has a topic sentence he has a topic sentence he has a first I’m gonna make this a color he has a first he has in also instead of a second that was his choice and he has a third so this writer has three main points.